I enjoyed your elevator pitch. I was hooked in with your opening statement. You did a great job of explaining the problem. Your solution was great too. You spoke clearly and slowly so I could understand everything you had to say. I like that you added a timer on your device so it does not have to be used all the time.
You controlled your mannerisms very well and delivered the elevator pitch with confidence. After watching your pitch, I was convinced that such a product is needed today. I agree with your approach to provide your audience with an overwhelming amount of evidence that drunk drivers are more likely to cause car accidents than people who are sober so that audience members would be convinced of the need for your product. Next time, I would turn the TV off in the background to keep people from being distracted from the message of your pitch. Other than that, your elevator pitch was awesome!
I enjoyed your elevator pitch. I was hooked in with your opening statement. You did a great job of explaining the problem. Your solution was great too. You spoke clearly and slowly so I could understand everything you had to say. I like that you added a timer on your device so it does not have to be used all the time.
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ReplyDeleteYou controlled your mannerisms very well and delivered the elevator pitch with confidence. After watching your pitch, I was convinced that such a product is needed today. I agree with your approach to provide your audience with an overwhelming amount of evidence that drunk drivers are more likely to cause car accidents than people who are sober so that audience members would be convinced of the need for your product. Next time, I would turn the TV off in the background to keep people from being distracted from the message of your pitch. Other than that, your elevator pitch was awesome!